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Police make great catch at Ultimate Frisbee tournament.
Bank robber to get tossed into jail after tossing at Ultimate Frisbee tournament.
Handcuffs are the ultimate defense at Ultimate Frisbee tournament.
Wednesday, September 17, 2014
Alternate Lede for Express
Today's issue of Express (a publication of The Washington Post) covered the non-sports-related Ultimate news. While the news byte is a perfect topic for eyeopeners, the headline "Ultimate Frisbee tournaments are known havens for criminals" lacks creative punch that reads are accustomed to.
Some alternate ledes:
Police make great catch at Ultimate Frisbee tournament.
Bank robber to get tossed into jail after tossing at Ultimate Frisbee tournament.
Handcuffs are the ultimate defense at Ultimate Frisbee tournament.
Police make great catch at Ultimate Frisbee tournament.
Bank robber to get tossed into jail after tossing at Ultimate Frisbee tournament.
Handcuffs are the ultimate defense at Ultimate Frisbee tournament.
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